How will it be?
With out You and Me,
Together forever,
When we had to go our seperate ways,
and not together for all the days.
We had enjoyed so much
and will definately miss each
You will sure be missed!
We love You!
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its really corny! sorry
ReplyDeletelol. no need to apologize.
ReplyDeletei think it started out really good, but then at the end, it wasnt really fitting.
u rhymed the first half, and then didnt the second.
it was really good though and all worked, but maybe try to rhyme the second half of it
Sad poem - was this about a friend that passed away? I like how you rhyme some lines but not others, and I also like how you broke your lines. You still need to proofread a bit - line 7 for example. I would also like to see more visual and sensory imagery.
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