The room is empty.
My mind is blank.
The night is warm.
Not knowing what to think.
Hearing the wind being so free.
Made me jealous.
Now thinking if something made real sense.
Being stock in this dark cave.
But i can't control any of these.
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Abraham, I like the first two lines about the room being empty (just like the mind) - nice comparison. I also like the lines about "the wind being so free / Made me jealous." I don't understand line 7 and 8 though. Also proofread the last two lines.
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