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men's greatest treasure
her beauty cant be measure
bring you happiness
takes away sadness
she would be there till the end
with a kiss
sweetest as candy
she will be your one and only
make her understand
you are her greates friend
she hangs you her hand
and she would say
I love you always
i really like how this poem evolves as the reader gets further into it. You never quite know what the subject is and by the end it is still up for interpretation.
ReplyDeletejose u r an incredible poet. i love the rhyme scheme and how friendship is brought out through metephors to be the world's most beautiful thing
ReplyDeleteGreat job, Jose! I like how your title acts as the first line of the poem.
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