Perfection is undefinable beauty,
Your perfect is not my perfect,
So can we make a perfect world?
A world that is truly perfect for all?
Imperfection surrounds us,
but it's what creates diversity,
and makes everyday a new one,
One to be lived like non other.
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ryan i like how you make the comparison and the contrast between perfection and imperfection and how you mentioned that everyone has a different opinion of perfection. your poem makes the reader think. good job. :)
ReplyDeleteRyan, i really like how you use imagery with how you say imperfection surrounds us. it makes the reader really think about what is going on in the world and how non perfect things really are or how perfect they are depending on the persons point of view.
ReplyDeleteRyan, I agree that everyone has a different perspective of perfection based on their worldview and experiences. I would like to see more imagery so I can visualize what you view as perfection. I'm also curious about your question "So can we make a perfect world?" I'm assuming your answer is yes, because we all can have perfection on our own terms. Also you have a typo - non should be none.
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