Release the negative air that pressurizes
the essence of your soul.
Liberate your thoughts of wisdom.
Unshackle the reigns that harness
your stress.
Redeem what has been lost.
Surrender your soul in relaxation.
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I like how the poem flows! It feels like something someone would say to start a yoga class. I also liked the way you used the breaking of the lines, it helped add to the poem.
ReplyDeleteI love how calm this poem is, you can apply it to yourself and it does flow very well. It leaves you speechless and thinking deeply at the end of it.
ReplyDeleteI like the portrayl of stress as a physical object that has been chained to you.
ReplyDeleteSkylar, I love your poem. Right now, during this hectic period in school this poem helps me relax and look forward to break! You are a true poet whether you know it
ReplyDeleteI appreciate the positive aura of this poem - the words at the end of each line are meaningful and the message of the poem resonates with your readers. Nice work. I especially like the line about the pressure that negativity places on one's soul...good to remember.
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