we as a world
need to learn to live as one
to create peace
its the only way to create peace
we need to accept differences
religion, race, gender, beliefs
once the world relizes, or
accepts
the differences
we may, once again
live as one
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Kirsten, I really like the message of this poem...seems so simple, but we know it isn't. I like how you broke your lines and the emphasis you put on the word "accepts." I would like to see a little more imagery and figurative language though.
ReplyDeleteI completely agree with this poem. I like how you split up the stanza into different lengths and phrases. good point of view.
ReplyDeleteWe definitly do need to work as one... I like this poem
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